Post by Natalie Brice on Apr 30, 2006 19:14:42 GMT -5
I wrote this fanfiction a few weeks ago and decided to share it with all of you! If you're too excited to wait for me to post the remainder of the chapters, you can find the rest on my account at www.fanfiction.net/~kwiditchjunkie.
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Chapter 1: The Queen
Long Beach, California
One week ago
“Shut up, Steve. We’ll get caught,” the 16 year old boy hissed over his shoulder as he lead the way down a long narrow corridor.
The other boy, Steve, ignored him and kept arguing with him, “Why are we even here, Dan! We’re supposed to be back at the hotel with the rest of the class. If we don’t leave now, they’ll know we’re gone sooner or later.”
“Aw come on, man,” said Zach, the last boy in the group. He chuckled and punched Steve teasingly in the shoulder. “We’ll just take a quick look around and then we’ll leave. No one will even notice.”
“That’s not it,” Steve said. “This place gives me the creeps at night.”
Dan gave an exaspirated sigh and said, “Listen. Nothing’s going to get you. I just want to prove the legends are true! Besides... maybe Tiffany will finally notice me now. If we go in and get that bathtowel like I promised, no doubt she’ll go out with me! She’s pretty, she’s got a great body, and she’s rich not to mention.”
“You know that sounds so dumb coming from you... Probably from anyone really,” Zach said, chuckling.
“Shut up,” Dan snapped, getting annoyed. He raised the flashlight higher over his head and trekked onward down the hallway.
Before long, a thick steel door seperated the boys from the room beyond.
“This is it,” Dan said, grabbing the handle and tugging it open. The heavy door creaked open with a sound of metal on metal until it was far enough to be squeezed through.
Steve took a deep shuddering breath as he looked into the pitch black room, “Here goes nothing.”
He stepped through and the other two followed with upmost attentive hearing. Now was the time to be scared. If Steve was nervous before, this room should have brought it upon all three of them by now.
The pool room of the Queen Mary is by far the most haunted part of the floating museum. Infamous for being a hang out for ghosts, tours and various other tourist attractions now keep the old ship alive.
The three boys stepped into the pool room, their steps echoing around the massive area.
“Whoa,” was all that Dan said, shining his flashlight over the walls.
“Come on, can we just go back now? I’d like to be sleeping right about now,” Steve complained.
Zach, meanwhile, was busy venturing further into the pool room and leaning over the pools edge to look into the empty pit.
“Lemme find that towel, alright?” Dan said, moving over to the towel rack and pulling a white towel from the top. He held it up and saw the Queen Mary insignia on the corner and folded it up, putting it into this coat pocket.
“Alright, let’s go,” he said, walking back over to the others.
Suddenly, he slipped on something on the floor and fell flat on his back on the cold tile. With a groan, he rolled over and lifted his head a few inches off the floor. The breath had been knocked out of him and it took him a while to reply to his friend’s calls.
“I’m fine,” he stammered, getting to his knees, clutching his chest.
He glared at the tile, embarrassed at his own misfortune. Something caught his eye on the floor that made him pause for a moment. Leaning forward ever so slightly, he saw the glimmer of water on the tile before him. “What the hell?”
Tilting his head ever so slightly to the left, he directed the light at an angle and saw a trail of water foot prints leading from the pool to the shower house. Confused, Dan furrowed his eyebrows and slowly got to his feet.
“This pool hasn’t been filled in years...” he said to his friends who had come over to help him up.
Suddenly, the sound of shower nozels echoed around the room. All boys stared at the shower room and saw steam billowing out of the open and fully illuminated doors. Their hearts jumped up into their throats in an instant at the sound of a woman’s voice floating around them, humming a melancholy tune.
“Dan? Can we please go now?” Steve pleaded.
Dan didn’t say anything, he just stared at the showers, the lights reflected upon his eyes like hypnotic orbs.
“Yeah... yeah. Let’s move,” Zach said, tugging on Dan’s sleeve and walking back towards the doors. But Dan didn’t move. He stayed, staring at the showers, his eyes half closed in a dazed kind of expression.
“Hey man! Let’s get out of here!” Zach shouted. But Dan ignored him, or rather didn’t hear him.
The two boys faintly heard him whisper, “She’s beautiful.”
“What! DAN! NO WAIT! DAN STOP!” They both shouted as Dan took small, shuffling steps toward the showers.
He grinned lopsidedly as he stared at the empty doorspace, mumbling, “Beautiful... so beautiful... calling... closer...”
In a few seconds Dan disappeared behind the wall into the women’s showers. Once inside, he was suddenly brought back from his trance. Shaking his head, he looked around him but it was impossible to see anything but thick, white steam. “Hello?” he called.
Slowly, he shuffled towards what he thought must have been a wall and put his hands out to stop himself.
Suddenly, he felt someone standing behind him. He stopped dead in his tracks and turned slowly. Before him stood a beautiful woman in a long, flowing grey dress. A dress that matched the very exterior of the Queen Mary. Her wavy blonde hair swept down to her waist and swirled by some unseen force. Her piercing blue eyes looked right through him, like diamonds glistening in the moonlight.
Dan grew red and stammered, “I’m sorry. I must have stumbled in--”
Just then, the woman said something to him but he didn’t hear a word of it. He drowned her out with a blood-curdling scream that echoed through the showers and out into the pool room.
Dan fell limply to the floor. He was dead before he hit the ground. Blood splattered like paint on the wall and slowly smeared down the side, dripping into the bubbles making them seem to glow bright red. Soon a thick trail of red blood flowed like a stream from Dan’s body and severed head through the water from the shower and into the nearby drain. His fingers twitched for a fraction of a second before growing still.
All that remained in the room was the swirling mist, the hissing of the showers, and voices floating in and out, “Dan? Dan? Quit foolin’ around, dude... Dan?”
A lone foot print, left in the pool of blood, was slowly swept away down the drain, swirling through pipes rusted and crusty after many years of rest.
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Las Vegas, Nevada
Present Day
“Haha! Yeah baby!” Dean Winchester shouted, grinning like a million bucks and pumping his fists over his head.
The dealer mumbled quietly, “Bet totals 9,000 dollars.”
Dean put his arms around two pretty girls and they both kissed him on each cheek for good luck.
He rolled the dice again and came up with lucky number seven once more. “I AM GREATNESS PERSONIFIED!” Dean shouted to the ceiling as the crowd erupted in cheers.
The girls squealed as the chips slid over to Dean and he gathered them up. “One for you,” he said, putting a chip in her hand. “And one for you,” he said, giving another to the second. “Later ladies!”
Turning on his heels, he strolled out of the gambling area and cashed in.
Sam Winchester, Dean’s younger and yet much more mature younger brother, sat on the hood of their 1967 Chevy Impala with his arms folded tenaciously on his chest.
“Heheh,” Dean said, coming up behind him and waving the wad of cash in front of Sam’s face, “We actually get to eat real food this week, Sammy!”
“Yeah, yeah, just great,” Sam said, pushing it out of his way and walking to the passenger side of the car.
“You’re just jealous,” Dean said, putting the money in his wallet. Finding that it wound’t close, Dean moved to the trunk and opened it to reveal a crap load of weapons. Guns, axes, pistols, crowbars and any other kind of thing you could imagine.
“Jealous of what? Your stupidity?” Sam asked once Dean sat in the drivers seat.
He smiled falsely at Sam and started up the car. “Black Dog” by Led Zeppelin blared as he pulled out of the parking lot and out onto the street.
“So, what did you do while I was in there?” Dean asked, turning down the music for a civilized conversation.
“Well, I was looking through some of the local newspapers and one of them said...” he pulled out a folded newspaper from the dashboard and whipped it open. “It says ‘Local Teen Dies on Queen Mary, Foul Play Suspected’.”
Dean half shook his head, “The Queen Mary. Supposedly the most haunted ship in history... B.S.”
Sam looked shocked, “Dean. You just said it yourself, the Queen Mary is one of the most haunted places in the United States.”
“Yeah? So? After all these years not once has anyone been attacked, or threatened by the ‘ghosts’ of the Queen Mary. Who’s to say that this wasn’t just some freak accident? Nothing paranormal whatsoever.”
Sam laughed disbelievingly, “I don’t believe you. Did we not just have this argument a few weeks ago? Can you just be a little open minded to a new job?”
“I’m just sayin’. These things can be just some huge accident and shouldn’t bother us at all,” Dean said, tongue in cheek.
“This might get your attention,” Sam said. “The kid’s head is missing.”
Dean paused, staring straight ahead. After a second he admitted, “Okay. Now that’s a little weird.”
“Right,” Sam said, shifting in his seat, “How about it?”
“Well,... we’re pretty close to the Californian border. I guess once we cross it we can crash at a motel or something and then start up the day with a trip to...”
“Long Beach, California,” Sam said, folding up the paper. He was smiling in triumph over his brother’s weakness for the supernatural.
“Long Beach, California it is,” Dean said, turning up the volume and accelerating down the dark street toward the border.
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Author's Note: Thank for reading the first chapter! Lots more on the way.
Please review. I'd like a lot of input from all of you.
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Chapter 1: The Queen
Long Beach, California
One week ago
“Shut up, Steve. We’ll get caught,” the 16 year old boy hissed over his shoulder as he lead the way down a long narrow corridor.
The other boy, Steve, ignored him and kept arguing with him, “Why are we even here, Dan! We’re supposed to be back at the hotel with the rest of the class. If we don’t leave now, they’ll know we’re gone sooner or later.”
“Aw come on, man,” said Zach, the last boy in the group. He chuckled and punched Steve teasingly in the shoulder. “We’ll just take a quick look around and then we’ll leave. No one will even notice.”
“That’s not it,” Steve said. “This place gives me the creeps at night.”
Dan gave an exaspirated sigh and said, “Listen. Nothing’s going to get you. I just want to prove the legends are true! Besides... maybe Tiffany will finally notice me now. If we go in and get that bathtowel like I promised, no doubt she’ll go out with me! She’s pretty, she’s got a great body, and she’s rich not to mention.”
“You know that sounds so dumb coming from you... Probably from anyone really,” Zach said, chuckling.
“Shut up,” Dan snapped, getting annoyed. He raised the flashlight higher over his head and trekked onward down the hallway.
Before long, a thick steel door seperated the boys from the room beyond.
“This is it,” Dan said, grabbing the handle and tugging it open. The heavy door creaked open with a sound of metal on metal until it was far enough to be squeezed through.
Steve took a deep shuddering breath as he looked into the pitch black room, “Here goes nothing.”
He stepped through and the other two followed with upmost attentive hearing. Now was the time to be scared. If Steve was nervous before, this room should have brought it upon all three of them by now.
The pool room of the Queen Mary is by far the most haunted part of the floating museum. Infamous for being a hang out for ghosts, tours and various other tourist attractions now keep the old ship alive.
The three boys stepped into the pool room, their steps echoing around the massive area.
“Whoa,” was all that Dan said, shining his flashlight over the walls.
“Come on, can we just go back now? I’d like to be sleeping right about now,” Steve complained.
Zach, meanwhile, was busy venturing further into the pool room and leaning over the pools edge to look into the empty pit.
“Lemme find that towel, alright?” Dan said, moving over to the towel rack and pulling a white towel from the top. He held it up and saw the Queen Mary insignia on the corner and folded it up, putting it into this coat pocket.
“Alright, let’s go,” he said, walking back over to the others.
Suddenly, he slipped on something on the floor and fell flat on his back on the cold tile. With a groan, he rolled over and lifted his head a few inches off the floor. The breath had been knocked out of him and it took him a while to reply to his friend’s calls.
“I’m fine,” he stammered, getting to his knees, clutching his chest.
He glared at the tile, embarrassed at his own misfortune. Something caught his eye on the floor that made him pause for a moment. Leaning forward ever so slightly, he saw the glimmer of water on the tile before him. “What the hell?”
Tilting his head ever so slightly to the left, he directed the light at an angle and saw a trail of water foot prints leading from the pool to the shower house. Confused, Dan furrowed his eyebrows and slowly got to his feet.
“This pool hasn’t been filled in years...” he said to his friends who had come over to help him up.
Suddenly, the sound of shower nozels echoed around the room. All boys stared at the shower room and saw steam billowing out of the open and fully illuminated doors. Their hearts jumped up into their throats in an instant at the sound of a woman’s voice floating around them, humming a melancholy tune.
“Dan? Can we please go now?” Steve pleaded.
Dan didn’t say anything, he just stared at the showers, the lights reflected upon his eyes like hypnotic orbs.
“Yeah... yeah. Let’s move,” Zach said, tugging on Dan’s sleeve and walking back towards the doors. But Dan didn’t move. He stayed, staring at the showers, his eyes half closed in a dazed kind of expression.
“Hey man! Let’s get out of here!” Zach shouted. But Dan ignored him, or rather didn’t hear him.
The two boys faintly heard him whisper, “She’s beautiful.”
“What! DAN! NO WAIT! DAN STOP!” They both shouted as Dan took small, shuffling steps toward the showers.
He grinned lopsidedly as he stared at the empty doorspace, mumbling, “Beautiful... so beautiful... calling... closer...”
In a few seconds Dan disappeared behind the wall into the women’s showers. Once inside, he was suddenly brought back from his trance. Shaking his head, he looked around him but it was impossible to see anything but thick, white steam. “Hello?” he called.
Slowly, he shuffled towards what he thought must have been a wall and put his hands out to stop himself.
Suddenly, he felt someone standing behind him. He stopped dead in his tracks and turned slowly. Before him stood a beautiful woman in a long, flowing grey dress. A dress that matched the very exterior of the Queen Mary. Her wavy blonde hair swept down to her waist and swirled by some unseen force. Her piercing blue eyes looked right through him, like diamonds glistening in the moonlight.
Dan grew red and stammered, “I’m sorry. I must have stumbled in--”
Just then, the woman said something to him but he didn’t hear a word of it. He drowned her out with a blood-curdling scream that echoed through the showers and out into the pool room.
Dan fell limply to the floor. He was dead before he hit the ground. Blood splattered like paint on the wall and slowly smeared down the side, dripping into the bubbles making them seem to glow bright red. Soon a thick trail of red blood flowed like a stream from Dan’s body and severed head through the water from the shower and into the nearby drain. His fingers twitched for a fraction of a second before growing still.
All that remained in the room was the swirling mist, the hissing of the showers, and voices floating in and out, “Dan? Dan? Quit foolin’ around, dude... Dan?”
A lone foot print, left in the pool of blood, was slowly swept away down the drain, swirling through pipes rusted and crusty after many years of rest.
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Las Vegas, Nevada
Present Day
“Haha! Yeah baby!” Dean Winchester shouted, grinning like a million bucks and pumping his fists over his head.
The dealer mumbled quietly, “Bet totals 9,000 dollars.”
Dean put his arms around two pretty girls and they both kissed him on each cheek for good luck.
He rolled the dice again and came up with lucky number seven once more. “I AM GREATNESS PERSONIFIED!” Dean shouted to the ceiling as the crowd erupted in cheers.
The girls squealed as the chips slid over to Dean and he gathered them up. “One for you,” he said, putting a chip in her hand. “And one for you,” he said, giving another to the second. “Later ladies!”
Turning on his heels, he strolled out of the gambling area and cashed in.
Sam Winchester, Dean’s younger and yet much more mature younger brother, sat on the hood of their 1967 Chevy Impala with his arms folded tenaciously on his chest.
“Heheh,” Dean said, coming up behind him and waving the wad of cash in front of Sam’s face, “We actually get to eat real food this week, Sammy!”
“Yeah, yeah, just great,” Sam said, pushing it out of his way and walking to the passenger side of the car.
“You’re just jealous,” Dean said, putting the money in his wallet. Finding that it wound’t close, Dean moved to the trunk and opened it to reveal a crap load of weapons. Guns, axes, pistols, crowbars and any other kind of thing you could imagine.
“Jealous of what? Your stupidity?” Sam asked once Dean sat in the drivers seat.
He smiled falsely at Sam and started up the car. “Black Dog” by Led Zeppelin blared as he pulled out of the parking lot and out onto the street.
“So, what did you do while I was in there?” Dean asked, turning down the music for a civilized conversation.
“Well, I was looking through some of the local newspapers and one of them said...” he pulled out a folded newspaper from the dashboard and whipped it open. “It says ‘Local Teen Dies on Queen Mary, Foul Play Suspected’.”
Dean half shook his head, “The Queen Mary. Supposedly the most haunted ship in history... B.S.”
Sam looked shocked, “Dean. You just said it yourself, the Queen Mary is one of the most haunted places in the United States.”
“Yeah? So? After all these years not once has anyone been attacked, or threatened by the ‘ghosts’ of the Queen Mary. Who’s to say that this wasn’t just some freak accident? Nothing paranormal whatsoever.”
Sam laughed disbelievingly, “I don’t believe you. Did we not just have this argument a few weeks ago? Can you just be a little open minded to a new job?”
“I’m just sayin’. These things can be just some huge accident and shouldn’t bother us at all,” Dean said, tongue in cheek.
“This might get your attention,” Sam said. “The kid’s head is missing.”
Dean paused, staring straight ahead. After a second he admitted, “Okay. Now that’s a little weird.”
“Right,” Sam said, shifting in his seat, “How about it?”
“Well,... we’re pretty close to the Californian border. I guess once we cross it we can crash at a motel or something and then start up the day with a trip to...”
“Long Beach, California,” Sam said, folding up the paper. He was smiling in triumph over his brother’s weakness for the supernatural.
“Long Beach, California it is,” Dean said, turning up the volume and accelerating down the dark street toward the border.
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Author's Note: Thank for reading the first chapter! Lots more on the way.
Please review. I'd like a lot of input from all of you.